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Aya Icon

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This is an icon of my oc aya
not for use by anyone other than me
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(c)notebook-queen
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© 2013 - 2024 Notebook-Queen
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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Impact

The coloring is pretty good but the anatomy is kind of off. Her head is a bit lopsided. Try working on your chins, I'm sure you'll get the hang of it with time. Well, the clothing is a bit hard to see, so perhaps with your next avatars, try doing it in a different position? Possibly a standing position, that way her arms and legs won't be blocking her pretty dress. Also, the blush is a bit too much, it looks like her skin is changing colors, rather than blushing. It goes a bit too far over her eyes, so look out for that next time. Good luck with improving. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":)" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=":) (Smile)"/>